Los Angeles Film School – Hollywood Dialogue Writing Composition

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Los Angeles Film School – Hollywood Dialogue Writing Composition

The following scene is full of obvious exposition. Rewrite the scene using conflict, humor, or a confidante to replace obvious exposition.

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SAL

So when did you move to Cleveland?

TED

About two years ago.

SAL

You are kidding.I moved here two years ago myself.

TED

What are you doing now?

SAL

I work for a large investment banker.

TED

I’m a successful umpire.

SAL

I love baseball.But I have no time to go anymore, let alone play.I used to be a pitcher on the bank’s softball team.

TED

I’m getting a little bored with it, actually.

SAL

How could you? Everyone loves baseball.My kids especially do.

TED

I have no kids.

SAL

I thought you were married.

TED

I was. We divorced.My wife was very selfish; she didn’t want to ruin her figure with children.

SAL

I have three great kids.

TED

That’s great.

SAL

One from each of my marriages.But the third time is the charm; my new wife is a wonderful woman.

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